Passion Project
I’m super into movies. And equality in movies. Something I especially love is the Bechdel Test, an informal metric created by Alison Bechdel to gauge how much a film focuses on and develops female characters. The test asks: Do two named women talk to each other about something other than a man? While it’s not a definitive measure of the quality of a movie, it does raise questions about how we treat and value women in film. Although it’s a simple test, you’d be surprised how many beloved movies don’t pass it.
My goal for this passion project was to combine my value of feminism, desire to be a screenwriter, and love of learning new things. My process went like this: I sat down and watched one movie a week, took notes on the plot, dialogue, and themes of the movie, brainstormed a possible new scene, scene extender, or some other solution, taught myself how to write a screenplay, then made a TikTok for each movie summarizing the film and my script-writing process. This was harder than it looked—and for brevity, I’m only including my three favorite scenes I wrote. (Gold, silver, and bronze.) Spoilers ahead!
Superman (2025)
In Superman, Lois Lane and Cat Grant are two journalists at the Daily Planet. They interact for less than twenty seconds and only talk about Lois’ boyfriend. My scene extension would make it pass with flying colors, incorporating the film’s plot point of the ongoing military conflict.
Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse (2018)
While Aunt May and Doc Ock do have a face-to-face interaction in this fight scene (see right), under the Bechdel Test rules, it’s not actually a conversation because they don’t respond back-and-forth to each other. This small moment they share is a huge missed opportunity—earlier in the film, Doc Ock establishes that only her friends call her Liv. So, I took that and ran with it.
Napoleon Dynamite (2004)
This cult classic has multiple great female characters, but they never interact. Consider LaFawnduh, Kip’s girlfriend, and Deb, Napoleon’s crush—what would they talk about? My scene answers that, and would be inserted after LaFawnduh is introduced.